tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9044085402425695391.post8035846063323861005..comments2023-04-01T05:01:13.712-05:00Comments on Story Art!: Jeremy ProvostStory Arthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11527587737578764735noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9044085402425695391.post-90014957573649432402011-01-04T20:21:32.610-06:002011-01-04T20:21:32.610-06:00Nice humor.Nice humor.Nedhttp://www.nedgannon.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9044085402425695391.post-61061157892014580802010-12-30T07:42:34.838-06:002010-12-30T07:42:34.838-06:00Thank you for your feedback- I really appreciate i...Thank you for your feedback- I really appreciate it!Jeremyhttp://jproillustration.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9044085402425695391.post-72392246420437165922010-12-23T08:15:34.151-06:002010-12-23T08:15:34.151-06:00Great illustrations Jeremy! I think they are both ...Great illustrations Jeremy! I think they are both good choices to take to New York. Your colors are vibrant and both scenes have a lot of depth. <br /><br />The first image contains a lot of emotion, which is always good. The composition might be a little stronger if the tree/dragon was positioned a little off center. I would also change the value of either the tree or the dragon so they are not so much the same.<br /><br />The composition in the second illustration is teriffic. There is a great feeling of interaction between characters. The little boys face obviously reflects the purple from the dragon, but the orange shirt still seems pretty orange. I would either pull some of the purple from the rest of the boy or add a bit more to the shirt.<br /><br />Good luck and have a wonderful time in New York!Story Arthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11527587737578764735noreply@blogger.com